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I translated this article from a magazine. Thanks for your corrections!
Soda Consumption
Soda is among the more consumed carbonated and sugared beverages all over the world. Less than five years, Mexico moved from third to first place of countries which more soda consumes. Excessive sugar intake is a key factor to develop diabetes, a disease which has become the eighth cause of death worldwide and the second one in our country.
Top ten countries with more soda consumption (per person per year)
1. Mexico
2. USA
3. Chile
4. Brazil
5. Colombia
6. Peru
7. Argentina
8. Uruguay
9. Saudi Arabia
10. Germany
Soda and sugar
According to World Health Organization, daily sugar intake for an adult with a normal BMI should be 25 grams, or 5% of total food intake.
There is an average of 60 grams of sugar in a 600 milliliters soda bottle.
Favorite flavors in Mexico: cola, apple, grapefruit and orange.
Monthly per capita beverages expenditure: milk $282, soda $213, water $137
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There's a few corrections needed there. Could you post it as a notebook entry?
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Thanks a lot! I will do it :)
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If you want a large piece of text corrected, it is easier to post it as a notebook entry. Then people can show you where the corrections are. :)
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Soda Consumption
Soda is among the most consumed carbonated and sugared beverages in the world. Less than five years ago, Mexico moved from third to first place of countries which consume the most soda. Excessive sugar intake is a key factor in developing diabetes, a disease which has become the eighth cause of death worldwide and the second one in our country.
Top ten countries with the most soda consumption (per person per year)
1. Mexico
2. USA
3. Chile
4. Brazil
5. Colombia
6. Peru
7. Argentina
8. Uruguay
9. Saudi Arabia
10. Germany
Soda and sugar
According to the World Health Organization, daily sugar intake for an adult with a normal BMI should be 25 grams, or 5% of total food intake.
There is an average of 60 grams of sugar in a 600 milliliters [In the UK, we spell it ‘millilitres’] soda bottle.
Favorite flavors [In the UK, we spell it ‘Favourite flavours’] in Mexico: cola, apple, grapefruit and orange.
Monthly per capita beverages expenditure: milk $282, soda $213, water $137
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