could anyone correct my essay!?! plz
Studying the history of your country is the greatest things about people have done and how they showed. Furthermore, knowledge of history is important to recognize a person 's own culture.
However, it's always good for being active citizen to show your love for your country by being part of it. Many people give up their time to help with charities, such as giving a hand for the elderly.
To sum up, studying the history and being an active citizen demonstrate your love of the country.

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could anyone correct my essay!?!  plz
Studying the history of your country is the greatest things about people have done and how they showed. Furthermore, knowledge of history is important to recognize a person 's own culture. 
    However, it's always good for being active citizen to show your love for your country by being part of it. Many people give up their time to help with charities, such as giving a hand for the elderly. 
  To sum up,  studying the history and being an active citizen demonstrate your love of the country.

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You should write this as a notebook entry instead of a question, that way we can use the editing tools to highlight the mistakes and cross things out.

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Perhaps you should put this in the Notebook as it is not really a question.

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