Does my sentence have any errors or mistakes?
I hope you guys proofread this to be sure there aren't any mistakes.
Pointing out straight forward would be highly appeciated if some part looks weird,
This is the one page of posting to introduce my blog. Here it is.
I'm nobody here and I don't have the experience being patient to keep the manage of a blog.
Blogging sometimes make me stressed out cause they makes it happen for me to racall the thing I have screw loose to do.
Besides, There's not enough stuff to post in the blog around my life.
I'm kind of home buddy (but not cough potato who waste their life in just watching something weird.).
So dynamic events cannot be happened easily in my life.
It's not easy to catch who exact I am afterward first meeting in this blog.
But once you know me very well, It'll prove that I'm not that bad guy and such a collective person with a
goood heart.
Hope that I would be your bosom buddy. Mr.Blogger.
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Here are my corrections, without your original post because I had too many characters to post a comment with it lol!
I'm nobody here and I don't have the experience or patience to manage a blog.
Blogging sometimes makes me stressed because it forces me to recall the things I forget. (I think maybe you're referring to "loose screws" which means that you forget some things or are extra silly sometimes. Like if you have a crazy uncle who drinks at your wedding, you'd say "Uncle Jerry has a couple of loose screws up there!" or if your friend is forgetful, you could say "Larry, I think you've got a couple of loose screws in that head of yours" or something like that.)
Besides, there isn't enough stuff to post on my blog about my life.
I'm kind of a home body (but not a couch potato who wastes their life watching weird stuff).
So dynamic (or you could use the word interesting) events do not happen commonly in my life.
It's not easy to understand exactly who I am after first meeting me in this blog.
But once you know me very well, it'll prove that I'm not a bad guy but a collective person with a good heart.
I hope that I would be your bosom buddy. Mr.Blogger.
The definition of "bosom" is "a woman's chest", so maybe choose a different word, or it could come off as creepy, or that you're only interested in a female audience!
Good job! I think sometimes translations are hard because of the difference in cultures and sentence structure, but you're going such a great job! Good luck on your blog!
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