Hi to everyone! I'd like to know if it is correct or not and why! please correct my story!
When I was young, I wanted to becoming a doctor.
And someone who read said to me "why this thinking?"
it's becouse I would want to helping people,
and give them some opportunieties of life.
It was becouse in my childhood nobody doesn't bother of me.
I told to everyone if I would have became a doctor, and all people said that I was too child to knowing about my future.
So that's becouse after I decided to changing my dream and wanted to becoming a teacher. Everybody said to me "why do you change your plan of life?" and I said "becouse I want to teach everybody to do their own business"

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Hi to everyone! I'd like to know if it is correct or not and why! please correct my story!
When I was young, I wanted to becoming a doctor.
And someone who read said to me "why this thinking?"
it's becouse I would want to helping people,
and give them some opportunieties of life.
It was becouse in my childhood nobody doesn't bother of me.
I told to everyone if I would have became a doctor, and all people said that I was too child to knowing about my future. 
So that's becouse after I decided to changing my dream and wanted to becoming a teacher. Everybody said to me "why do you change your plan of life?" and I said "becouse I want to teach everybody to do their own business"

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Thank you for your correction :-) 
Maybe I will do it the next time :)

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if you add as a notebook entry, people can correct it easier

When I was young, I wanted to become a doctor.
And someone who read said to me "why are you thinking this?"
it's because I want to help people,
and give them some opportunity of life.
It was because in my childhood nobody bothered with me.
I told everyone that I will become a doctor, and everyone said that I was too young to know about my future. 
That is the reason that later,  I decided to change my dream and wanted to become a teacher. Everybody said to me "why do you change your plan of life?" and I said "because I want to teach everybody to mind their own business"

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