Please advise if the below email is correct before i send it
The subject employee has received JPY 900/- as “Special Incentive” in Sept-14 salary for the first time.
The employees wants to know if he is really eligible for this amount or it is due to some error.

Question

Please advise if the below email is correct before i send it
The subject employee has received JPY 900/- as “Special Incentive” in Sept-14 salary for the first time. 
The employees wants to know if he is really eligible for this amount or it is due to some error.

Answer

You're very close!

"The employee received JPY 900/- as “Special Incentive” in his Sept-14 paycheck.  The employee wants to know if he is really eligible for this amount or if it is due to some error."

Answer

This is not correct.  Please place it in the notebook for corrections.

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