I have a question again
Inspired by a revolt dating back to the 12th century, against a ruthless count that used to drag young girls to his chambers, the festival celebrates the people's victory and their freedom.

If I rewrite the sentence would it be
like As the festival is Inspired by a revolt dating back to the 12th century, against a ruthless count that used to drag young girls to his chambers, the festival celebrates the people's victory and their freedom.
or
The festival which is inspired by a revolt dating back to 12th century, against ~ celebrates the people's victory and their freedom.?
Thank u for your concern

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I have a question again
Inspired by a revolt dating back to the 12th century, against a ruthless count that used to drag young girls to his chambers, the festival celebrates the people's victory and their freedom.

If I rewrite the sentence would  it  be
like As the festival is Inspired by a revolt dating back to the 12th century, against a ruthless count that used to drag young girls to his chambers, the festival celebrates the people's victory and their freedom. 
or
The festival which is inspired by a revolt dating back to 12th century, against ~ celebrates the people's victory and their freedom.?
Thank u for your concern

Answer

I would take the easy way out: I'd break it into more than one sentence. It is a collection of several different thoughts, not one complicated thought.

The festival of X celebrates the peoples' victory and their freedom. It commemorates a 12th-century revolt against count X, a ruthless count who used to drag young girls to his chambers.

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How about: Inspired by a revolt dating back to the 12th century, this festival celebrates the people's victory and freedom from a ruthless count who would drag young girls into his chambers.

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