Could you plz check my mistakes in this text ! Thanks
. Por favor plz can u check my mistakes in this text , i want to post it in my blog , it is very important for me , hope u'll help me ... <<Today I was walking to metro station when a girl approached me and asked about city center way ,as she was lost and lil bit nervous , I decided to walk with her and show the way. On our way to city center she told me that she's from Istambul , and that's her first visit to Europe . When I told that I m armenian she suddenly stopped smiling , after a second she said ,, I 'm sorry, sorry for everything ... ,, I really did'nt know what to say , after seconds of silence i just smiled backed . We both understood the silence , but both of us didn't want to talk about the details. We got to Puerta de Sol. And when we were to say goodbye to each other she told me that her fathers mom was hidden armenian , they discovered it just after her death, and now she's very interested in the history of armenia .“= = = = =
Today I was walking to metro station when a girl approached me and asked about city center way ,as she was lost and lil bit nervous , I decided to walk with her and show the way. On our way to city center she told me that she's from Istambul , and that's her first visit to Europe . When I told that I m armenian she suddenly stopped smiling , after a second she said ,, I 'm sorry, sorry for everything ... ,, I really did'nt know what to say , after seconds of silence i just smiled backed . We both understood the silence , but both of us didn't want to talk about the details. We got to Puerta de Sol. And when we were to say goodbye to each other she told me that her fathers mom was hidden armenian , they discovered it just after her death, and now she's very interested in the history of armenia .“
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OK, well "plz can u" makes you sound like a lazy teenager trying to impress his/her schoolmates.
Your text is below. Your second mistake is using punctuation that isn't used in English, but IS used in programming code. That's why it disappeared.
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Today I was walking to metro station when a girl approached me and asked about city center way ,as she was lost and lil bit nervous , I decided to walk with her and show the way. On our way to city center she told me that she's from Istambul , and that's her first visit to Europe . When I told that I m armenian she suddenly stopped smiling , after a second she said ,, I 'm sorry, sorry for everything ... ,, I really did'nt know what to say , after seconds of silence i just smiled backed . We both understood the silence , but both of us didn't want to talk about the details. We got to Puerta de Sol. And when we were to say goodbye to each other she told me that her fathers mom was hidden armenian , they discovered it just after her death, and now she's very interested in the history of armenia .“
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