Hi, could you help me with my User introduction??
I would like to know if there is any mistakes or something that could be better about my User introduction. Here it is:
Quick User Introduction
I'm Arthur, I love English but I still need skills improvement. I also like helping people out so if you need anything let me know. I'm Brazilian and I'd be glad if I could be of some help for those who are learning Portuguese.
Long User Introduction
Hi I'm Brazilian from Campinas - São Paulo. My name is Arthur M. Cruz and I just left my job in order to live with my girlfriend and help her take care of her mom who has been sick.
I enjoy every single minute spent with the language maybe because I love watching American TV shows, movies, Youtube tutorials, listening to music and stuff like that, so learning English helped me a lot. Unfortunately I don't have any speaking practice what could help me get a better Job or even make new friends, that's why I'm here. So if someone wants to learn Portuguese we could help each other. What do you think
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In your quick user introduction, you should write: "I'm Arthur, I love English but I still need to improve my language skills."
in your long user introduction, you should write: "so learning English helps me a lot", "Unfortunately I have not had any speaking practice that could help me get a better job", and "What do you think?"
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Looks like it's better now.
Quick User Introduction
I'm Arthur, I love English but I still need to improve my language skills. I also like helping people out so if you need anything let me know. I'm Brazilian and I'd be glad if I could be of some help for those who are learning Portuguese.
Long User Introduction
Hi I'm Brazilian from Campinas - São Paulo. My name is Arthur M. Cruz and I just left my job in order to live with my girlfriend and help her take care of her mom who has been sick.
I enjoy every single minute spent with the language maybe because I love watching American TV shows, movies, YouTube tutorials, listening to music and stuff like that, so learning English helps me a lot. Unfortunately I have not had any speaking practice even though that might help me get a better Job and make new friends, that's why I'm here. So if someone wants to learn Portuguese we could help each other. What do you think?
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