could you please reply my question?
is this text written in a correct way?I,m gonna send it to a manager of a company and I'd like that it is written in the best way.We wanna talk about my possible employment and the conditions of working in that company.Does it make sense to use negotiation for this context?

I would like to use my brother's laptop to have negotiation on Skype at your convenience .I'll be waiting for your response .

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could you please reply my question?
is this text written in a correct way?I,m gonna send it to a manager of  a company and I'd like that it is written in the best way.We wanna talk about my possible employment and the conditions of working in that company.Does it make sense to use negotiation for this context?

I would like to use my brother's laptop to have negotiation on Skype at your convenience  .I'll be waiting for your response .

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Unless there is a specific reason that he needs to know that you're using your brother's laptop, I would not include it.

"I would like to make a negotiation through Skype.  I am looking forward to your response."

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