Hi Pretty much the same as the previous two: "According to my point of view, if we spend money on noble causes it will be beneficial for mankind. In this there are lots of issues which are more important than space exploration, such as starvation and global warming. Recently, newspapers have published stories of people everywhere dying of starvation. The world community also points out the issue in its report. This report also describes forthcoming problems. For example, inflationary commodity prices and reduced food production. But in spite of these things, we cannot abnegate the advantages of space exploration." A couple of small points: (1)upcoming is used more by American tha English speakers, and (2) if this is a formal text or esay, never use words like "don't" - they are conversation words and you should use the full form, eg "do not".

I would give you my version but please, wait a little for other answers too (Hopefully from native English speakers) since they may know of a better way to say it. Nowadays every country is spending money in space exploration From my point of view if we spend money on a noble cause it will be beneficial for humanity. I think there are a lot of issues which are more important than space exploration, such as starvation, global warming, etc. It was recently published in the newspaper that all over the world many people keep dying due to starvation . The world community pointed out the previous issue in a report that also elaborated on upcoming problems like inflation, price increase on commodities and a decrease in food production. But despite all that, we can't deny the advantages of space exploration.

According to my point of view, it will be beneficial for man kind if we spend that money on noble cause. There are lot of issues which are more important than space exploration. such as, starvation, global warming etc. Recently, newspapers have published stories of many people all over the world dying due to starvation . The world community pointed out the issue on its report. The report also mentioned the up coming problems. For example, price increase in commodities and reduced food production . But despite of those, we cannot abnegate the advantages of space exploriation.

According to my point of view, it will be beneficial for man kind if we spend that money on noble cause. There are lot of issues which are more important than space exploration. such as, starvation, global warming etc. Recently, newspapers have published stories of many people all over the world dying due to starvation . The world community also point out the issue on its report.The report also pointed out the up coming problems. For example, price increase in commodities and reduced food production . But despite of those, we cannot abnegate the advantages of space exploriation.

Wait, lol you want me to correct it, opps. If we spend that money on noble causes it will be beneficial for all of mankind . In this their are lots of issue which are more important than space exploration. Some of these issues are starvation, global warming etc. Recently published in many newspapers people all over the world died due to starvation .The world community also points out these issues and elaborates on upcoming problems. Some of these issues include inflation in commodities and the decrease in food production. However, despite that we can't abnegate advantages of space exploration.