Could you , please, correct
However, through the territory of national nature reserve runs across the Transcaucasian highway. Furthermore, since 2009 has been activating the construction of Zaramag hydro power plant (HPP), and since 2010 they have been building the pool daily regulation, derivational and summing to water diversion tunnels, paved roads, involved in a lot of construction machinery and vehicles, roads are not moistened as they should be, the environment is polluted by exhaust gases and dust, roadside vegetation is dying, the normal life of all living on these territories is disturbed. There are also four stone crushing companies which are operating in the valleys of the rivers Ardon and Sadon, and there is a reservoir of the Mizur’s concentration plant in the area of the village Nizhniy Unal, in the immediate vicinity of the river Ardon.

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Could you , please, correct
However, through the territory of  national nature reserve runs across the Transcaucasian highway. Furthermore, since 2009 has been activating the construction of Zaramag hydro power plant (HPP), and since 2010 they have been building the pool daily regulation, derivational and summing to water diversion tunnels, paved roads, involved in a lot of construction machinery and vehicles, roads are not moistened as they should be, the environment is polluted by exhaust gases and dust, roadside vegetation is dying, the normal life of all living on these territories is disturbed. There are also four stone crushing companies which are operating in the valleys of the rivers Ardon and Sadon, and there is a reservoir  of the Mizur’s concentration plant in the area of the village Nizhniy Unal, in the immediate vicinity of the river Ardon.

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I have tried to help with editing, though it is difficult, particulary in regards to the sentance about the daily pool regulation.

However,  the Transcaucasian highway runs through the national nature reserve, and in 2009 (subject) commenced the construction of the Zaramag hydro power plant (HPP). Since 2010, they have been implementing the daily pool regulation, deriving and summing water to diversion tunnels. Paved roads, heavily trafficked by construction machinery and vehicles, are not moistened as they should be, and the environment is polluted by exhaust gases and dust. As a result roadside vegetation is dying, and habitats are either being disturbed or destroyed. There are also four stone crushing companies which operate in the valleys of the rivers Ardon and Sadon, as well as in the reservoir of the Mizur’s concentration plant in the area of the village Nizhniy Unal, in the immediate vicinity of the river Ardon.

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