Is this sound natural?
One day, when Judy was drawing something in her room, her mother came in holding a big shopping bag.
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yup!
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The grammar is correct. The punctuation is correct. The general pattern of phrasing seems natural. It's very good.
"Drawing something" seems a little awkward to me. I think I would say
"One day, when Judy was in her room drawing a picture, her mother came in holding a big shopping bag."
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Note: "Is this natural?" "Does this sound natural?" Use "do" when asking about an action.
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