Please, can somebody help me here?
Hi, can somebody tell me if this is ok? I'm translating a web page for a friend of mine who owns a company of bags and I'd like to know if this is OK. I know it has a lot of mistakes but right now I'm not able to see where are those mistakes? Please! Thanks in advance!

"Pepito" was born in 2011 at the foot of the “Serra de Tramuntana” in the old village of Alaró, Majorca.

The designs and making of the bags are influenced by this old and grey coloured landscape giving shape to a unique, elegant and classic style that results in an authentically special and different product.

All the ítems are genuiely made and impregnated by the spirit of the island from the beginning til' the end.

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Please, can somebody help me here?
Hi, can somebody tell me if this is ok? I'm translating a web page for a friend of mine who owns a company of bags and  I'd like to know if this is OK. I know it has a lot of mistakes but right now I'm not able to see where are those mistakes? Please! Thanks in advance!

"Pepito" was born in 2011 at the foot of the “Serra de Tramuntana” in the old village of Alaró, Majorca.

The designs and making of the bags are influenced by this old and grey coloured landscape giving shape to a unique, elegant and classic style that results in an authentically special and different product.

All the ítems are genuiely made and impregnated by the spirit of the island from the beginning til' the end.

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How about this (suggested rephrasing are contained in between the asterisks):

"Pepito" was born in 2011 at the foot of the “Serra de Tramuntana” *mountains* in the old village of Alaró, Majorca.

The designs and making [fabrication, construction] of the bags are influenced by this *ancient and weathered* landscape giving *form* to a unique, elegant and classic style that results in an authentically special, *one of a kind* product.

All the ítems are *hand-made* and *imbued* by the spirit of the island from the beginning *until* the end.

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