Did I write this sentence right?
The one, who puts you on her shoulders, gives you the greatest love of the whole wild world.The one, who puts you on her shoulders, gives you the greatest love of the whole wide world.

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Did I write this sentence right?
The one,  who puts you on her shoulders, gives you the greatest love of the whole wild world.The one, who puts you on her shoulders, gives you the greatest love of the whole wide world.

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"The one who puts you on her shoulders gives you the greatest love in the whole wide world." would be correct. The commas are unnecessary.

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if you speak of effort looking for love, stand me your interesting statement, one wild love, and fight.

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First comma is unnecessary, it is not an appositive. Change of to in.

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