How can I make these statements natural?
I have gathered all the details to formulate a response to this article.
The message will only catalyze more anger from citizens.
The man was shamefully dishonest even after he was caught.
Without sportsmanship, people won't be able to understand the sport itself.
The rate of opportunities of apprenticeship for students have skyrocketed when the government passed a new bill.
The criminal should be given the most sufferable of all punishments.
People who are moralistic tend to not understand what is indeed right and wrong.
The man shamelessly laughed when the parents of the parent yelled at him in tears.

Question

How can I make these statements natural?
I have gathered all the details to formulate a response to this article. 
The message will only catalyze more anger from citizens. 
The man was shamefully dishonest even after he was caught. 
Without sportsmanship, people won't be able to understand the sport itself. 
The rate of opportunities of apprenticeship for students have skyrocketed when the government passed a new bill. 
The criminal should be given the most sufferable of all punishments. 
People who are moralistic tend to not understand what is indeed right and wrong. 
The man shamelessly laughed when the parents of the parent yelled at him in tears.

Answer

I have gathered all the details to write a response to this article.
The message will only make the citizens more angry.
The man was shamefully dishonest even after he was caught. (This one is OK)
Without sportsmanship, people would not be able to understand the sport itself.
The rate of opportunities for apprenticeship for students skyrocketed when the government passed the new bill.
The criminal should be given the worst punishment.
People without strong morals tend to not understand what is right and wrong.
The man shamelessly laughed when the parents of the parent yelled with him in tears (parents of the parent does not seem to make much sense, you may be thinking of grandparents.)

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