How to make this sentence better?
"This valuable experience taught me that determination will help me to triumph over any difficulties I might encounter, and it also provided me with the opportunity to develop my leadership."

I think this sentence is not coherent enough, but I don't know how to polish it.
Is there anyone who can help me? I would appreciate it.
thanks.

Question

How to make this sentence better?
"This valuable experience taught me that determination will help me to triumph over any difficulties I might encounter, and it also provided me with the opportunity to develop my leadership."

I think this sentence is not coherent enough, but I don't know how to polish it.
Is there anyone who can help me? I would appreciate it. 
thanks.

Answer

"This valuable experience HAS taught me that determination will help me to triumph over any difficulties I might encounter, and it HAS also provided me with the opportunity to develop my leadership SKILLS."

This sounds really professional, nice work :)

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