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It is known that you are having company personnel recruitment for staff positions should I apply Event applying for this position .

I graduated in foreign languages and has years of experience in PR and Event roles . My main work in partnership with the business and management development of corporate image to the public . Planning and implementation of the planned event .

I often act as general director of the event from the conceptualization to implementation direction and support parts of his job performance , as settlement for the program .... Details of experience I mentioned the work attached CV , companies are looking forward to spending time reviewing and evaluating .

Hopefully we will have a meeting to be able to live a more detailed exchange of experiences as well as my ability to work . I believe I fully consistent with the position that the company is hiring .

Please thank .

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my letter is right?
Dear

It is known that you are having company personnel recruitment for staff positions should I apply Event applying for this position .

I graduated in foreign languages ​​and has years of experience in PR and Event roles . My main work in partnership with the business and management development of corporate image to the public . Planning and implementation of the planned event .

I often act as general director of the event from the conceptualization to implementation direction and support parts of his job performance , as settlement for the program .... Details of experience I mentioned the work attached CV , companies are looking forward to spending time reviewing and evaluating .

Hopefully we will have a meeting to be able to live a more detailed exchange of experiences as well as my ability to work . I believe I fully consistent with the position that the company is hiring .

Please thank .

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I wish to enquire whether your company is recruiting personnel for  various staff positions.  If so, I would  like to apply for one of these positions  in your company.

I graduated in foreign languages ​​and have had many years of experience in  the roles of PR and Event Planning. My  previous work  was in  business, mainly in   the areas of  management  and  the development of public  corporate images.  I also planned and implemented various events .

For example,  in my role as director of an  event, I oversaw it from its conceptualization to the implementation. My role was  also to direct and support people in this job , oversee performances and finish the program .
  I have mentioned more details of  my experience in the attached CV. I hope that your company is able to review and provide me with some feedback in relation to this application .

I look forward to having an interview in order to be able  to discuss my suitability for this position  in more detail.  I believe I that I am  fully  capable of  fulfilling the   position that your company is advertising.

Yours sincerely,
Your full name and surname

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There are a number of mistakes, and some of them are very basic. It's far easier to correct text in Notebook than in Answers.

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