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Meanwhile, once you’ve spent 1000 yuan or above at the Jewelry City, you can draw the lottery, which you may get a silver accessory, Huanglong jade, pearl or other prices.
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Meanwhile, once you’ve spent 1000 yuan or above at the Jewelry City, you can draw the lottery, which you may get a silver accessory, Huanglong jade, pearl or other prices.
Very clear, but let me do a few correction!
" Meanwhile, once you spent 1000 Yuan or more at Jewellery City, you can draw the lottery and maybe win silver accessories, Huanglong jade, pearls or other prizes."
Hope this will help you. Good luck with your English. Teacher Hannes Fouche
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many thanks for your correction
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I do not think the answer you selected as the Best Answer is 100% correct.
Correction:
"Meanwhile, once you've spent..."
You must have "YOU'VE" in there "once you spent" does not make sense.
Also, "...draw the lottery and maybe win..." does not make sense in this context -
"you can ENTER a lottery to possibily win" or "you can draw from a lucky dip to win".
My answer would be:
Meanwhile, once you've spent 1000 Yuan or more at Jewellery City, you can draw from a lucky dip to possibly win silver accessories, Huanglong jade, pearls or other prizes.
Hope this helps.
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