How can I make these statements natural?
In order to not encounter his former friends, he sequestered himself from the outside world.
These countries have been ranked as the top in police corruption rate.
This type of yoga helps people in becoming animated and living to the moment.
Real men respect women as fellow human beings, not as sexual toys.
Friendship between men and women is actually possible.
The strict punishment of sexual harassment should apply to the person who committed that act, regardless of gender.

Question

How can I make these statements natural?
In order to not encounter his former friends, he sequestered himself from the outside world. 
These countries have been ranked as the top in police corruption rate. 
This type of yoga helps people in becoming animated and living to the moment. 
Real men respect women as fellow human beings, not as sexual toys.  
Friendship between men and women is actually possible. 
The strict punishment of sexual harassment should apply to the person who committed that act, regardless of gender.

Answer

If your goal is to make your sentences sound more natural, use simple words and short, direct sentences. "To avoid meeting his former friends, he stayed inside." "The top countries for police corruption are..." "This type of yoga energies people and improves the ability to focus." "Real men respect women as humans, not sexual toys." "Women and men can be friends." Irregardless of gender, sexual harassment should be strictly enforced."

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