is this sentence awkward?better way to say it? They were trying to share health and beauty with other Chinese women and also spread this kind of idea.

Sarah

Answers · 2

It could be simply stated "they were trying to share and spread the concept of health and beauty with other Chinese women. " I uaed concept in place of idea.

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