Hi, could somebody help me to check several sentences from my presentation? I mean the grammar!
1. ...that shows one of the ways to develop the sales.
2. The project we talk about today is called Pull-Effect.
3. As each project has three main stages.
4. After the first and the second stages the decision is made whether to continue the project or not.
5. The importance, I want to underline, is that these communications should be build on Product, Relationship and Services simultaneously.
6. I would like to emphasize that the communications between my Company and a customer are the actions of Pull-Effect project.
7. How to say it better: We don't have any direct sales or there are no direct sales.
8. What should be the principle of pricing.
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1) ....that shows one of best way to develop/increase/promote the sales.
2) Today, the project we are talking about is Pull-Effect.
3) Each project has three main stages.
4) After the completion of first and second stages, the decision will be made whether to continue the project or not.
5) The importance, I want to underline, is that these communications should be build upon product, relationship and services simultaneously.
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Sorry for answering in the next answer, I've a mobile which has a limited text writing.
6) I would like to emphasize that the communications between a customer and my company are the actions of our Pull-Effect project.
7) We don't have (/offer) any direct sales.
8) At last, what should be the principle for pricing ?
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Firstly - it is a little difficult to tell, with only fragments. They could be right or wrong, depending on the rest of the sentence.
To be more natural, (2) should be either 'we are talking about' or 'we will talk about'.
It's not clear from the context, but (4) is probably 'a decision will be made...'
(5) built
(6) ...of the pull...
(6) 'communications' and 'actions' don't really make sense together to me. But again, out of context, it isn't clear.
(7) either is OK.
(8) +'?'
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Thanks a lot!
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7. We currently don't have any direct sales.
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