are "shake up" and "revamp" used correctly here
1 the company shakes up senior executives to seek rejuvenation;
2 "the revamp of senior executives"

are "shake up" and "revamp" used correctly here

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are  "shake up" and "revamp" used correctly here
1 the company shakes up senior executives to seek rejuvenation;
 2  "the revamp of senior executives"

are  "shake up" and "revamp" used correctly here

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I think possibly not. 
Typically you do not 'revamp' people. You revamp things. 
'Shake up' is quite informal (and usually quite negative) - so possibly doesn't fit here either.

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I think it depends on the context or the audience your speaking to. Your sentences are creatively written which you will find most typically in novels.

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Thanks u guys. how to revise this sensence then?

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