please help me to correct my grammar and polish my english
mental accounting refers to the process of thinking organizing, and recording finanicial activities by individuals. people tend to separate their money into several accounts and assign different functions to these accounts. the way they separate the money has effects on their financial behaviours, so it is very significant to learn more about mental accounting in order to avoid irrational financial decisions.
my favourite example is about New York city taxi drivers that how they quit earlier on good days if they have set certain levels of target earnings per day. it seems that taxi drivers create earning accounts each day.once it reaches certain levels, they tend to close the account and view money beyond that level as unnecessary to make. it is very irrational since they do not think in an overall way. they can make more money on good days and work less on bad days.

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please help me to correct my grammar and polish my english
mental accounting refers to the process of thinking organizing, and recording finanicial activities by individuals. people tend to separate their money into several accounts and assign different functions to these accounts. the way they separate the money has effects on their financial behaviours, so it is very significant to learn more about mental accounting in order to avoid irrational financial decisions. 
my favourite example is about New York city taxi drivers that how they quit earlier on good days if they have set  certain levels of target earnings per day. it seems that taxi drivers create  earning accounts each day.once it reaches certain levels, they tend to close the account and view money beyond that level as unnecessary to make. it is very irrational since they do not think in an overall way.  they can  make more money on good days and work less on bad days.

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The most important piece of advice I can give you is to capitalize the letter at the beginning of your sentences after a "." (period).
For example:
Mental accounting refers to the process of thinking organizing, and recording finanicial activities by individuals. People ....

You need to correct the grammar of this sentence.  "my favourite example is about New York city taxi drivers that how they quit earlier on good days if they have set certain levels of target earnings per day."

I would suggest, "My favourite examples are New York city taxi drivers. They often quit early on good days if they reach their earning goal for that particular day."

Also, " it is very irrational since they do not think in an overall way." Can be said, "It is very irrational since they do not think of the 'big picture'."

To think of the "big picture" is a culturally correct phrase to explain someone thinking in an "overall way".

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