For the company, the participation of..
is this sentence good? clear? or any better way?
For the company, the participation of its employee is the ultimate goal of the talent pool development strategy.
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Answers · 3
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many thanks. your sentence is good
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Maybe it should say
The company's ultimate goal of the talent pool development strategy is the participation of its employees.
just a suggestion, I'm not completely sure.
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I think it's clear but it should say 'employees'.
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