Is this sentence okay? grammatically
Striving to be the most characteristic jewelry hotel in Shenzhen, even in China, It is believed that there are great opportunities for cooperation between both of the hotel management companies.

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Is this sentence okay?  grammatically
Striving to be the most characteristic jewelry hotel in Shenzhen, even in China, It is believed that there are great opportunities for cooperation between both of the hotel management companies.

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The sentence contains a dangling modifier in the introductory phrase "striving to be the most characteristic jewelry hotel in Shenzhen". Besides that, what is a "jewelry hotel"?

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Striving to be the most characteristic jewelry hotel in Shenzhen, even in all of China, It is believed that there are great opportunities for cooperation between both the hotel management companies.

this now reads better but its meaning is unclear when taken out of context

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