Can you correct the spelling mistakes?
when the storms take a break
when the clouds has gone get back
when the seas have a rest and,
when night has come back...
look to sky for last time,
you think me anytime

I want you to know that
you are my sunshine
ı'm a world, turn around
tell me now
Can you think of a sunless world?

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Can you correct the spelling mistakes?
when the storms take a break
when the clouds has gone get back 
when the seas have a rest and,
when night has come back...
look to sky for last time, 
you think me anytime

I want you to know that 
you are my sunshine
ı'm a world, turn around
tell me now
Can you think of a sunless world?

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thank you!! :)

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Nevertheless we can make some improvements;

when the storms take a break
when the clouds HAVE gone get back 
when the seas have a rest and,
when night has come back...
look to THE sky for THE last time, 
you think OF/ABOUT me anytime

I want you to know that 
you are my sunshine
ı'm a world, turn around
tell me now
Can you think of a sunless world?

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Thanks :)

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I don't see any spelling mistakes. It is a very nice poem, but it is not worded correctly.  (you think me anytime) I am not sure what this means. There are other parts that don't sound right but poems are a work of art and they don't have to be as structured as other sentences.

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