Could you help me to correct this sentences?
1. When I finish each thing,I should be recorded in the "READ ME", let another in-charge know what I do before.

2.When I get some trouble ,first , I need to think that can I doped out a solution to the problem or not, if I can't solve the problem, Notification Manager.

3.according to the work flow work, piece by piece, to prevent the omission.

THANKS A LOT

Question

Could you help me to correct this sentences?
1. When I finish each thing,I should be recorded in the "READ ME", let another in-charge know what I do before.

2.When I get some trouble ,first , I need to think that can I doped out a solution to the problem or not, if I can't solve the problem, Notification Manager.

3.according to the work flow work, piece by piece, to prevent the omission.

THANKS A LOT

Answer

Ok, in my opinion, the 1st sentence should be "...I should record it..." ---> You needn't use passive voice here. 
2. "...consider whether I can work out the problem or not..."

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