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how can I improve on it? Dear XX, I am interested in applying for a teacher position in your school in X because I think to be the right candidate for this job opportunity. I have a five-months experience as teacher (I taught Italian language to children and teenagers), I have a master degree in Translation and the DITALS 2 certification. I also attended an intensive course to teach Italian language to foreigners at XX institute of XX, where I learned the core elements of pedagogy, psychology and how to plan a teaching path. During this course I did a stage in the classes of the Institute. My passion for children is combined with my creativity. As teacher, I like turning a play or a moment of fun in a way to learn and grow. I’m very sociable and diplomatic and I try to learn from everyday experiences. It is my goal to combine my knowledge with my ability to be a compassionate, enthusiastic teacher who will make a positive contribution to your school.

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I'd normally suggest posting this in Notebook, but only a few corrections are needed here. Paragraph 1: "...because I believe myself to be..." You could also use "consider myself to be". Paragraph 2: "I have five months' experience teaching Italian language to children and teenagers, and I possess a master's degree in Translation as well as the DITALS 2 certification." "I learned the core elements of pedagogy, psychology and planning a teaching course." Paragraph 3: "As a teacher, I like turning play or a moment of fun into an opportunity to learn and grow." Paragraph 4: "...to become a compassionate, enthusiastic teacher" Using "to be" is confusing, as it looks like "...with my ability to be..." at first glance.
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1. I believe I am the perfect candidate ... 2. I have a five-months (no particle 'a') 3. the DITALS 2 certification (no particle 'the'). instead write 'together with DITALS ... 4. During this course I did a stage -> I completed one full stage ? 5. a play or a moment of fun in a way to learn and grow -> play or fun into an opportunity to learn and grow
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I am interested in applying for a teaching position.... .....I have five months experience as a teacher. I taught italian to teenagers..... I also attended an intensive course teaching italian to ...

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