Our human society has made significant progress with the advent of modern industrialization, however increasing environment pollution has become a major concern. Some believe that it is the responsibility of individuals in society to make lifestyle changes in support of the environment. Personally, I believe that government plays the dominant role in terms of environment preservation. To begin with, the government has the ability to enforce environmental regulations in order to protect and improve the environment, and can be more efficient in doing so than individuals acting separately. For instance: government can prohibit chemical factories from releasing noxious fumes into the air or hazardous substances into the water. Secondly, the government can establish better regulatory law, and implement a system of fines to regulate both individuals and businesses in recycling, which is very important in saving energy and creating less pollution. Paper recycling can save millions of trees. Furthermore, the government can support the media in advertising or publishing instructive information aimed at enhancing the awareness of the public in support of their living a more healthy life. Admittedly, individuals and groups should also share the responsibility of creating a clean and healthy environment by doing many meaningful things like less driving, saving water and electricity, riding bicycles as much as possible and planting more trees. In summary, I would like to restate my view that government plays a crucial role in environmental protection by setting up strict law enforcement, while individuals also play an important role as well. We can only continue to enjoy a quality and healthy life when we have our wonderful homeland with a blue sky, clear water and clean soil.

You should really post this in your notebook for correction. It is easier to correct there. But overall, I can understand it well, although there are several minor grammatical mistakes.