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According to The Instabilities of Inheritance by Cates Baldrige, Oliver attacks his fellow apprentice, Noah Claypole, after Noah insults Oliver`s mother`s character.
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Maybe something like:
In Cates Baldrige's "The Instabilities of Inheritance," Oliver attacks Noah Claypole after his fellow apprentice insults his mother's character.
NOTES:
1. The reader can assume that "his fellow apprentice" refers to Noah Claypole.
2. The reader will assume that "his mother's" refers to "Oliver's mother," for it is unlikely that Noah would attack his own mother's character. Besides, that is the reason that Oliver attacked Noah.
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