Can you correct my professional presentation, it's for my degree!!! PART 1
My name is Laura Ganter. I study in higher education in Marketing and I’m in training course at the same time. I’m working in a small industrial company called “Audit Maintenance Ingénierie” or called “AMI”. She is located in Benfeld, near of Strasbourg. There are 10 employees. The atmosphere is business-like and very pleasant. My course began on October 10, 2012 and will be completed on July 30,2013. It’s the company that has approached the school for take a student trainee. And for 1 years, I’m working the Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday, then the rest of the week I am in School.
The unit where I work specializes in the wholesale trade in industrial (entity called AMI CONSEIL) and in the installation and maintenance of industrial products (entity called AMI TRAVAUX). Our main activities are industrial maintenance, industrial transfer, compressed air, industrial refrigeration and handling.
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My name is Laura Ganter. I’m studying Marketing in college and taking a training course at the same time. I work for a small industrial company called Audit Maintenance Ingénierie or AMI. AMI is located in Benfeld, (France??) near Strasbourg. There are ten employees. The atmosphere is business-like (or “professional”) and very pleasant.
My course began on October 10, 2012, and will be completed on July 30, 2013. The company approached the school about taking on a student trainee for one year. I work Monday through Wednesday and the rest of the week I am in school.
The unit where I work specializes in wholesale industrial trade (AMI CONSEIL) and in the installation and maintenance of industrial products (AMI TRAVAUX). Our main activities include: industrial maintenance, industrial transfer, compressed air*, industrial refrigeration, and handling.
*“compressed air” is not an activity. What exactly do you do with compressed air? Does your company compress it, or work with air compressors perhaps?? Also, “handling industrial refrigeration” is an activity, but “industrial refrigeration” is not. (Only the handling of it is, so this is just a bit confusing.) Perhaps: “Our main responsibilities include: industrial maintenance, industrial transfers, and handling compressed air and refrigeration.” This still sounds strange though, so maybe I’m not reading it correctly. Sorry. I hope it helps a little though.
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My name is Laura Ganter. I am a student of Higher Education with a major in Marketing. Also , I am enroled in training course at the same time. My course began on October 10, 2012 and will complete on July 30,2013. Simultaneously, I’m working in a small industrial company called “Audit Maintenance Ingénierie” or called “AMI”. It is located in Benfeld, near to Strasbourg. There are 10 employees altogether. The working environment is very pleasant and professional. The company choosed our university and shortlisted some students whom were offered as Student Trainee program for a year in their company. My working days are Monday, Tuesday and Wednesday and the rest of the week for my School.
The unit where I work, specialize in the wholesale trade in industrial (entity called AMI CONSEIL) and in the installation and maintenance of industrial products (entity called AMI TRAVAUX). Our main activities are industrial maintenance, industrial transfer, compressed air, industrial refrigeration and handling.
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