You should post text corrections here: http://www.italki.com/notebook Anyway, your text is not too long... From Broken English to Proper English Help me. I have written this text, but I know I have made many mistakes. Please correct my text. Everyone wants to win this vacation because it's an amazing opportunity to see the world. I personally want to win this prize because I have become confused in my life. I feel much possibility in myself, but I cannot get it started. I need a shake-up in order to be who I am. Sorry for my broken English. I'm from Russia.

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