any grammatical mistakes?
The get-together in 2013 was a lot more better than the show in 2012, which also signified the great progress that the company made during 2012.
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Hi,
I would make a few changes to Alan's revision: The company's show in 2013 was much better than the one in 2012; this emphasizes the significant progress the company made in 2012.
My concern is the use of "get-together"? It does not mean the same as "show". Thus, the suggested revision.
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The grammatically correct form is
The get-together in 2013 was a lot better than the show in 2012, which also signified the great progress that the company (had) made during 2012.
But the use of a clause starting with "which" sounds a little bit unnatural in this sentence.
I would rewrite the sentence as follows:
The get-together in 2013 was a lot better than the show in 2012; this also signified the great progress that the company had made during 2012.
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"a lot more better" is wrong.
good - better - best
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