Correct my text, please!
Hello, I have to present a chapter of a book and my chapter is 4 from the Wonderful Wizard of Oz. This is what I prepared to say so I'd be grateful if you help me to make it better.

"I’m going to talk about the chapter 4 from the book The Wonderful Wizard of Oz. In this chapter, Dorothy, the Tin WoodMan, the Lion and the Scarecrow go looking for the Wizard of Oz to get the way to home, a heart, courage and a brain. But the Wizard says that he will gives what they want but only if they kill the Wicked Witch of the West. The chapter ends with the witch seeing angrily the four friends walking for the Esmerald City into the Land of the Winkies (its where she is).
These are pictures from the movie recorded in 1939.
This is Dorothy and her friends talking to the wizard of oz that later she will finds out he is fake. And this is the wicked witch. "

Thank you!

Question

Correct my text, please!
Hello, I have to present a chapter of a book and my chapter is 4 from the Wonderful Wizard of Oz. This is what I prepared to say so I'd be grateful if you help me to make it better.

"I’m going to talk about the chapter 4 from the book The Wonderful Wizard of Oz. In this chapter, Dorothy, the Tin WoodMan, the Lion and the Scarecrow go looking for the Wizard of Oz to get the way to home, a heart, courage and a brain. But the Wizard says that he will gives what they want but only if they kill the Wicked Witch of the West. The chapter ends with the witch seeing angrily the four friends walking for the Esmerald City into the Land of the Winkies (its where she is). 
These are pictures from the movie recorded in 1939. 
This is Dorothy and her friends talking to the wizard of oz that later she will finds out he is fake. And this is the wicked witch. "

Thank you!

Answer

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"I’m going to talk about chapter 4 from the book The Wonderful Wizard of Oz. In this chapter, Dorothy, the Tin WoodMan, the Lion and the Scarecrow go looking for the Wizard of Oz to get the way to home, a heart, courage and a brain. But the Wizard says that he will give them what they want but only if they kill the Wicked Witch of the West. The chapter ends with the witch seeing angrily the four friends walking from the Emerald City into the Land of the Winkies, where she is. 
These are pictures from the movie recorded in 1939. 
This is Dorothy and her friends talking to the wizard of oz whom she later finds out  is fake. And this is the wicked witch. "

Not "the chapter 4"
Maybe "find the way" is better than "get the way".
he will gives what --> He will give them what ...
two "but"s? maybe will give them what they want only if ....
Emerald
walking from?

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