I need correction for the wrongs
today i woke up at 9 o'clock morning then I took a shower and worn my better clothes . after that i went to bus terminal in my city . when i reached ,i rode the bus which was going to Irbid governorate .
the distance between Ramtha; where i live and Irbid governorate maybe 20 K.M . the bus has taken half hour to reach bus terminal of Irbid governorate then i went to Jordan engineers association to complete registration request with syndicate .
I finished registration and got a certificate of membership of the syndicate .
when i out from the syndicate building , i met my friend Laith , we rode Taxi and went to photographer to take graduation pictures which must be delivered to the universtiy this week .

Question

I need correction for the wrongs
today i woke up at 9 o'clock morning then I took a shower and  worn my better clothes . after that i went to bus terminal in my city . when i reached ,i rode the bus which was going to Irbid governorate .
the distance between Ramtha; where i live and Irbid governorate maybe 20 K.M . the bus has taken half hour to reach bus terminal of Irbid governorate then  i went to Jordan engineers association  to complete registration   request with syndicate .
I finished registration and got a certificate of membership of the syndicate .
when i out from the syndicate building , i met my friend Laith , we rode Taxi and went to photographer to take graduation pictures which must be delivered to the universtiy  this week .

Answer

I think that you have done a very good job. Your paragraph is also very interesting.

I have only a few suggestions.

First, please remember that in English, it is necessary to ALWAYS capitalize the personal pronoun "I."

Now I shall suggest a few changes:

I woke up today at 9 a.m., took a shower, and put on my best clothes. I then went to the terminal here in Ramtha and took a bus for the thirty-minute trip to Irbid governorate.

When I arrived, I went to the Jordan Engineers' Association to register for membership. As I left, I met my friend Laith. We took a taxi to a photographer, who took our graduation pictures, which must be delivered to the university this week.

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