Could you correct my letter? Thanks a lot!
Dear Sir,

I'm writing in accordance with my recent stay in Lakeland Spa. I have found some aspects about my visit that were fine but unfortunately others they should be improved.

On one side, the rooms were very pleasant and hygienic. And the meetings that were hold on arrival were giving great useful information about the activities and the surrounding area of the Spa.
However, on the other side, the clothes of the only hotel's shop were totally overpriced and the range of sizes was not that wide. I think there should be more stock and a larger variety of sizes. Furthermore, prices need to go down as they were unaffordable for must of people. Another point that was not successful was the activities that were supposed to be offered. Most of the activities were fully booked and unfortunately I was just able to attend one class. I think that should be the possibility to book the classes in advance before the arrival. Moreover, it would be good to offer a wider range of groups specially the yoga classes that are very popular.

Thank you very much for your attention and I hope these advice will be take into consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Question

Could you correct my letter? Thanks a lot!
Dear Sir,

I'm writing in accordance with my recent stay in Lakeland Spa. I have found some aspects about my visit that were fine but unfortunately others they should be improved.

On one side, the rooms were very pleasant and hygienic. And the meetings that were hold on arrival were giving great useful information about the activities and the surrounding area of the Spa.
However, on the other side, the clothes of the only hotel's shop were totally overpriced and the range of sizes was not that wide. I think there should be more stock and a larger variety of sizes. Furthermore, prices need to go down as they were unaffordable for must of people. Another point that was not successful was the activities that were supposed to be offered. Most of the activities were fully booked and unfortunately I was just able to attend one class. I think that  should be the possibility to book the classes in advance before the arrival. Moreover, it would be good to offer a  wider range of groups specially the yoga classes that are very popular.

Thank you very much for your attention and I hope these advice will be take into consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Answer

I'm writing regarding my recent stay in Lakeland Spa. I found some aspects of my visit were fine, but, unfortunately, there were other areas which need to be improved.

On the positive side, the rooms were very pleasant and clean. Also, the meetings that were held on arrival were gave very useful information about the activities available and the area surrounding the Spa.
However, on the other side, the hotel's only shop was totally overpriced and the range of clothes sizes was very limited. I think there should be more stock and a larger variety of sizes. Furthermore, prices need to be lower, as they were unaffordable for most people. Another point that was disappointing was the activities that were supposed to be offered. Most of the activities were fully booked and unfortunately I was only able to attend one class. I think that there should be a way to book classes in advance, before arrival at the Spa. Moreover, it would be good to offer activities to a wider range of groups, especially the yoga classes which are very popular.

Thank you very much for your attention and I hope these comments will be take into consideration.

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Dear Sir,

I'm writing in regard  to my recent stay in Lakeland Spa. I have found that some aspects of my visit were fine while others unfortunately needed improvement.

On one hand, the rooms were very pleasant and hygienic. And the meetings that were held on arrival provided great useful information about the activities and the surrounding area of the Spa.
However, on the other hand, the clothes of the hotel's only shop were totally overpriced and the range of sizes was not that wide. I think there should be more stock and a larger variety of sizes. Furthermore, prices need to go down as they were unaffordable for most people. Another point that was not successful was the activities that were supposed to be offered. Most of the activities were fully booked and unfortunately I was able to attend only one class. I think it should be the possible to book the classes in advance before arrival. Moreover, it would be good to offer a wider range of groups, especially the yoga classes that are very popular.

Thank you very much for your attention and I hope these suggestions will be take into consideration.

Yours faithfully,

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And the meetings that were HELD on arrival gave great useful information about the activities and surrounding area of the spa.

However, on the other side, the clothes IN THE HOTEL'S ONLY shop were totally overpriced and the range of sizes was not that wide.

I think that IT should be POSSIBLE to book the classes in advance before arrival.

Moreover, it would be good to offer a wider range of groups, ESPECIALLY the yoga classes that are very popular.

I hope this helped you, you may contact me if you'd like!

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