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I'd like to share you why one of us have to live for others. I think everyone around the world like to feel happy and have good time in his life. but nothing comes as we like; there is always something makes us not satisfied and not happy for long time. so a lot of questions and wondering why that is happened. no one can answer, because all of us just needs to be happy without caring about the people around him how they feel. As a result, no one lives with the happiness for long time.
When we work and live to make people who are around us feel happy. Their smiles and their joy spread to fill everywhere. and then without any doubt our life will change to be full of love and happiness for ever

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Is  this correct
I'd like to share you why one of us have to live for others. I think everyone around the world like to feel happy and have good time in his life. but nothing comes as we like; there is always something makes us not satisfied and not happy for long time. so a lot of questions and wondering why that is happened. no one can answer, because all of us just needs to be happy without caring about the people around him how they feel. As a result, no one lives with the happiness for long time.
When we work and live to make people who are around us feel happy. Their smiles and their joy spread to fill everywhere. and then without any doubt our life will change to be full of love and happiness for  ever

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I'd like to share with you why we each should live for others:
I think everyone around the world likes to feel happy and have a good time during their lives, but everything can't turn out the way we want it to; there will always be something that will make us unhappy. Everyone has questions, and no one can tell us why bad things happen. People try to be happy, while also being selfish. These people will never find lasting-happiness.
When we work and live everyday to make others happy, we will find that we will be happier ourselves. Through a little kindness, everyone can live a better life.

Here is a quote you might like: 
"For it is in giving that we receive." - Francis of Assisi

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