Which sentence is better？
A.
For a teacher, being academically qualified doesn't neccessarily guarantee his success in inculcating moral standards.

B
Being a qualified teacher in acadamics does not mean he or she is capable of undertaking the work of moral education

Question

Which sentence is better？
A.
For a teacher, being academically qualified doesn't neccessarily guarantee his success in inculcating moral standards.

B
Being a qualified teacher in acadamics does not mean he or she is capable of undertaking the work of moral education

Answer

I think that the second sentence is clearer. My experience taught me that clarity beats unnecessary convolution that often makes readers frustrated, thus ineffective. If you want to talk about this more deeply, reach out to me.

Answer

I'd say the first one, but I would delete the possessive pronoun 'his'.

Answer

The first one :)

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