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Rich nations should educate people living in impoverished countries some rudimentary skills and train them some ways to prevent chronic ailments. Undoubtedly, in order to decrease the illiterate rate in underprivileged countries, wealth nations should dispatch qualified, skillful and proficient individuals to educate people from elementary education to further education. Finally, in order to thrive the economy of poor countries, wealth nations should increase trading with those countries. In this case, impoverished countries can gain more annually revenue from trading. Moreover, rich countries can construct essential plants and factories in the poor countries. Directing funds into different infrastructure projects lead to creation more job opportunities in poorer nations. Therefore, the unemployment rate can decline. All of these approaches can not only improve the standard of living in those countries, but those approaches can also increase the level of public hygiene and sanitation.
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Rich nations should educate people living in impoverished countries about some rudimentary skills and show them some ways of prevent chronic ailments. Undoubtedly, in order to decrease the illiterate rate in underprivileged countries, wealthy nations should dispatch qualified, skillful and proficient individuals to educate people from elementary education to further education. Finally, in order to thrive the economy of poor countries, wealthy nations should increase trading with those countries. In this case, impoverished countries can gain more annual revenue from trading. Moreover, rich countries can construct essential plants and factories in the poor countries. Directing funds into different infrastructure projects leads to creation more job opportunities in poorer nations. Therefore, the unemployment rate can decline. All of these approaches can not only improve the standard of living in those countries, but can also increase the level of public hygiene and sanitation.
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Perfect passage! Did you write it by yourself?
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wow this sentences have 23 new word for me
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It looks really good. I would put it in the notebook section so people can do corrections to it. The only thing I see is some punctuation is wrong, but not much.
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