Are these sentences ok?
Which one do you value more?
If you ever want to hang out with me, you call me anytime.
I have been waiting for this my whole entire life.
If I'm caught, I don't want it to be found on me.
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I have been waiting for this in my whole life.
If I were caught, I wouldn't want it to be found on me.
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oops, sentence 4 is fine as well.
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Sentence 1 is fine. Sentences 2 and 3 are used more in colloquial English and wouldn't necessarily be used in written English. Though you might hear "you call me anytime" or "whole, entire life" the "you" wouldn't be used and "whole, entire" is redundant, though the speaker may be trying for emphasis. The addition of you and whole with entire would give that feeling of emphasis.
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