Please can you help me correct this Chinese sentence.
This is a line from my latest notebook http://www.italki.com/notebook/entry/260650.htm

I think it does not make sense and people cant understand it, Please can you help me correct it. I included only snipits of the English in the original entry, which doesn't seem to have helped, so this time I will include the whole English version.

Thank you.

在大学我学习社会人类学，上个星期我们讨论概念‘其他’，当其他的对人产生什么影响，当其他的让人有什么感觉。星期天我发现当其他的真是给你什么感觉!
I am studying Social anthropology at university, last week we were talking about the concept of 'other'. what it means to be other , how being 'other' makes people feel. On Sunday I found out just how being 'other' makes you feel.'what it means to be 'other' can be understood as-what impact being 'other' has on people and their lives.

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Please can you help me correct this Chinese sentence.
 This is a line from my latest notebook http://www.italki.com/notebook/entry/260650.htm

I think it does not make sense and people cant understand it, Please can you help me correct it. I included only snipits of the English in the original entry, which doesn't seem to have helped, so this time I will include the whole English version.

Thank you.

在大学我学习社会人类学，上个星期我们讨论概念‘其他’，当其他的对人产生什么影响，当其他的让人有什么感觉。星期天我发现当其他的真是给你什么感觉! 
I am studying Social anthropology at university, last week we were talking about the concept of 'other'. what it means to be other , how being 'other' makes people feel. On Sunday I found out just how being 'other' makes you feel.'what it means to be 'other' can be understood as-what impact being 'other' has on people and their lives.

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well, the "other" in your context is a little bit confusing. First, I need to confirm the exact meaning of you 'other". If you want to say those different from majority or what most people will love to accept as,  the way we say that is " 另类".

If so, I will write as below:

我现在在大学学习社会人类学。上个星期我们讨论了如何定义＂另类＂,做＂另类＂意味着什么，它会对＂另类＂本人及生活有什么影响，以及＂另类＂会给他人什么感受。这个周日我体验了一把"当一个另类＂的感觉。

What did you do then? Why not tell us the whole story? :)

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I guess: 会怎样理解”其他“的含义以及做”其他“会人们和他们的生活产生什么样的影响。。。what's Other?

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我正在一所大学学习社会人类学，上个星期我们讨论了“其他”的概念。成为其他人有什么意义，成为“其他人”让人有什么感受。星期天我终于发现了成为“其他人”让你有怎样的感受。

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這裡不當形容詞用 應該是 "他人" "他者" 之意 相對於"自我"而言 即 "人我關係"中之"人"

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我在大学学习社会人类学，上个星期我们讨论了关于“其他”的概念，成为“其他”意味着什么，作为“其他”是怎样给人们留下影响的。星期天我找到了作为“其他”如何给你留下感觉的答案。
I don't know my translation wether get the meaning that you wanna express or not.But your Chinese is very well.And I wonder if you are trying to express that what being 'other' makes you feel,if it is what you wanna tell,it should be translated like this:作为其他人会给你什么样的感觉

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