Web site introduction
I made a top page of my web site with this introduction.
I want to make it simple. But I'm not sure whether it sounds cool or not. Please let me know your opinion.
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Thank you for visiting my site.
This site is my photo gallery and introduce you creatures in the Earth which I photographed. I hope you will enjoy it.
Sincerely
Takuya Morihisa -January 5. 2010-
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And how do you say when I add a new page on it? I wrote it "Something is now available."
Thank you!
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I'm not sure what the most popular convention is for telling people that you have added something to your website. There is nothing grammatically wrong with saying "~is now available". I've seen it on a few websites where people have written "~has been added". Or "Update: 30/09/2012 ~ has been added." I think it depends on the format of the rest of it, what would look suitable and will be easy for people to note if they visit your page often. I tried to see if I could find some examples quickly, but I couldn't find any websites that were advertising recent updates.
As for the introduction, I don't think there's anything necessarily wrong with it. It's personal the way it's been written. If you were to keep it as is, you'd want to make a couple of minor corrections:
Thank you for visiting my site.
This site is my photo gallery and introduces you to creatures on Earth which I have photographed. I hope you will enjoy it.
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However, I've rewritten it with just a couple of adjustments. There are a myriad ways to say something this simple, so it becomes difficult and I think it's really just a matter of what you like best.
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Thank you for visiting my site.
This is a collection of some of my photos and introduces you to some of the Earth's creatures that I've photographed. I hope you’ll enjoy them.
Sincerely,
Takuya Morihisa -January 5. 2010-
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I'm not sure, maybe I like the original more :) かっこういい!
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