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Could someone check my writing? Please Everyone has a point of view about if it is better to say the truth always or only sometimes. The people think that’s depend of the situation. For me, to say the truth is very important independent of the situation, because you win credibility and confidence if you never lie and if you lie, someone can be hurt. First, in order to gain credibility and confidence, we should be sincere with ourself. For instance, you could lie whenever you want, but the truth always is discovered. If you do that, the people never believe in you, due to they will know that you are a liar. Second, you could hurt to people if they discover your lies. It feels bad and you will feel disappointment of that person. For example, in a relationship, when someone cheats and the person find out the truth, that person could leave you or feeling sad. To conclude, it’s difficult to say the truth always, but it is better than lie, you can avoid hurting someone or lost your confidence and you won’t be able to gain that again. So being truthful is a very essential thing we must do.

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[Hi I would change a couple of things but otherwise very good.] Everyone has a point of view about if it is better to [always] say the truth, or only sometimes. [Many] people think that [it] depends of the situation. For me, to say the truth is very important independent of the situation, because you win credibility and confidence if you never lie. If you lie, someone can be hurt. First, in order to gain credibility and confidence, we should be sincere with ourself. For instance, you could lie whenever you want, but the truth [is] always discovered. If you do that, people [will] never believe in you, [owing to the fact] they know that you are a liar. Second[ly], you could hurt to people if they discover your lies. It feels bad and you will feel [the] disappointment of that person. For example, in a relationship, when someone cheats and the [other] person find[s] out the truth, that person could leave you or feel sad. To conclude, it’s difficult to always [tell] the truth, but it is better than [lying], you can avoid hurting someone or losing your confidence and you won’t be able to gain that again. So being truthful is a very essential thing we must do.

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