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Please correction for me : My short story 001 My boss paid my salary last month, but, I didn't happy and satisfactory. I saw that always deference between a white job and a black job. My friend get a more salary, because, He has an easy and block job. But, Now, I know that if I have a real and white job, at all times, it is better. My goals are very big and accessible I see skills my neighbor in language English speaking skills and good job. And, I think, I need to improve skills and the job situation. I can do it. Because. I want to success in my life. In this real short story two kind of feeling is hid. My emotion is the best way to success. I believe that every emotion is only a personal motive and very useful. ........This text move to my notebook. ................

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It's short enough to answer here but... I shan't. Post it here: www.italki.com/notebook You need some explanations for the corrections. It's better if it's done in Notebook.

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