who can continue my paragraph with a fifth line paragraph?

in the name of Allah
my name is ... and i am learning english at wahdat mosque. i want to learn english because it is an international language, and i need it for job in future. i try to learn it as a good student so i should try more than others

Question

who can continue my paragraph with a fifth line paragraph?

in the name of Allah
my name is ... and i am learning english at wahdat mosque. i want to learn english because it is an international language, and i need it for job in future. i try to learn it as a good student so i should try more than others

Answer

Well, I nominate you.

The difficulty is that I don't know who will read your text.  Is it just an introduction for anyone to read? The format is fine.  Is it for an employer?  It really needs a rewrite.

Are you looking for ideas?  Write something positive for the reader to respond to.

On a style point: you need to use capital letters properly. This is not optional.

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