are there something wrong with these sentence
No news from you so far,I have to inform you that today is July 30,I am afraid of that the goods will not be finished and shipped on schedule,as I have not yet received any informations abt this order from you,including payment and shipping mark,could you pls let me know how can I do on next step?
No news from you so far,I have to inform you that today is July 30,I am afraid of that the goods will not be finished and shipped on schedule,as I have not yet received any informations abt this order from you,including payment and shipping mark,could you pls let me know how can I do on next step?

至今都没收到你的消息，我不得不通知你方，今天已经是7月30号了，我很担心这批货不能如期完成并出货，因为我到现在都没收到你们任何关于货款和唛头的消息，能否告知我下一步该如何。

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are there something wrong with these sentence
No news from you so far,I have to inform you that today is July 30,I am afraid of that the goods will not be finished and shipped on schedule,as I have not yet received any informations abt this order from you,including payment and shipping mark,could you pls let me know how can I do on next step?
No news from you so far,I have to inform you that today is July 30,I am afraid of that the goods will not be finished and shipped on schedule,as I have not yet received any informations abt this order from you,including payment and shipping mark,could you pls let me know how can I do on next step?

至今都没收到你的消息，我不得不通知你方，今天已经是7月30号了，我很担心这批货不能如期完成并出货，因为我到现在都没收到你们任何关于货款和唛头的消息，能否告知我下一步该如何。

Answer

In this sentence "I am afraid of that the goods will not be finished and shipped on schedule" the word "of" should not be there. It should read "I am afraid that the goods will not be finished and shipped on schedule." The next thing that should be fixed is "could you pls let me know how can I do on next step?' That should read "Could you please let me know what I can do to move on to the next step?"

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