Please someone check my English, it's "about me" in my Facebook acc... I'm not sure about it.
It's a little bit childish but please check it for me... hehehe

1. K-pop FREAK? Yes I Am. Since 22nd January, 2007... well I'm still remember that dated on Monday 4:43 pm... yeah!! ! Dong Bang Shin Gi's HUG music video was my very first Kpop group that I have watched. I miss 5 of them... sob-sob :( Jaejoong... I'm still loving you...

2. ZE:A's Minwoo is my bias and and I'm sure he will be my future husband...haha...

3. WARN : Seriously you guys better don't add me... I'M NOT JOKING!! !

Question

Please someone check my English, it's "about me" in my Facebook acc... I'm not sure about it.
It's a little bit childish but please check it for me... hehehe

1. K-pop FREAK? Yes I Am. Since 22nd January, 2007... well I'm still remember that dated on Monday 4:43 pm... yeah!! ! Dong Bang Shin Gi's HUG music video was my very first Kpop group that I have watched. I miss 5 of them... sob-sob :( Jaejoong... I'm still loving you...

2. ZE:A's Minwoo is my bias and and I'm sure he will be my future husband...haha...

3. WARN : Seriously you guys better don't add me... I'M NOT JOKING!! !

Answer

Just a quick correction...

1. A K-pop FREAK? Yes I am - since the 22nd of January, 2007... well, I still remember that date on Monday at 4:43 pm... yeah!!! Dong Bang Shin Gi's HUG music video was the very first Kpop group that I watched. I miss all 5 of them... sob-sob :( Jaejoong... I'm still loving you...

2. I have a bias for ZE:A's Minwoo, and I'm sure he will be my future husband...haha...

3. WARNING: Seriously, you guys had better not add me... I'M NOT JOKING!!!

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