Is it right?
New type of credit cards, saving living expenses as much as spending money on purchasing eco-products, show up.

for native speakers, is that sentence natural? or, how can I fix up?

Question

Is it right?
New type of credit cards, saving living expenses as much as spending money on purchasing eco-products, show up.

for native speakers, is that sentence natural? or, how can I fix up?

Answer

to fix grammar, it should be something like:

New types of credit cards which save lower their users living expenses for money spent on purchasing environmentally-friendly products are showing up.

Maybe you want to say:

New types of credit cards are being offered which help people save money by giving them rewards for buying more environmentally-friendly products.

Answer

NOTE: I think that  'eco-'  may refer to 'economical' in some cases, not 'ecological'. Thus the change to environmentally-friendly.

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他講省錢，銀行人學賺錢嘛 :D

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银行工作人员？

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The meaning is not clear, however, I will take a guess
New type of credit cards show up that save living expenses when spending money on eco-products.
Generally, you shouldn't separate the subject and verb by a long subordinate clause.

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