Which sentence is right?
i wrote two sentences, but i am not sure which is right
1. I enjoy the breeze blowing on my face and feel i am free from everything.
2.I enjoy the breeze blowing on my face, feeling I am free from everything.
which sentence is right?
if both of them are incorrect,
how to revise it?
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Answers · 9
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The first sentence is OK. For the second, consider "enjoying the breeze blowing in my face, I feel I am free from everything."
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2.I enjoy the breeze blowing on my face, feeling I am free from everything.
#1 is somehow not correct. I don't know why, but it sounds stilted. The two clauses are too disconnected.
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"breeze on my face" is adequate, "blowing" is not really necessary.
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the first one is correct
second one should be,
.I enjoy the breeze blowing on my face, making me feel (that) I am free from everything.
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The second is more correct
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