Please analyse this sentence.
Now ,despite investor confidence in Cook, the successor to Jobs,who has stood in for his boss during three leaves of absence, there remian concerns about whether the company would stay a creative force to be reckoned with beyond the next year or so without its founder and visionary at the helm.
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Your sentence runs on a bit. I would suggest you break it into several sentences and (of course) correct your spelling and punctuation.
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Despite investor confidence in Cook, the successor to Jobs, there are concerns about whether the company can continue to be a creative force to be reckoned with in the future. Although Cook filled Jobs' leadership role during Jobs' three leaves of absence it remains to be seen whether Cook can truly be the visionary Jobs was.
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